Story outline

Finally, I am now putting the story together. I think that keeping it simple and to the point would be the most effective way of doing it. Since this is a horror film opening, a lot of my focus is on making it scary as possible rather than making a story with numerous layers.

     

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     As it starts the whole thing is recorded by one of the 2 human characters named Gabe. Him and his friend Erick are filming themselves messing around the park at night for fun. As they walk further into the park, Erick sees a strange almost human like silhouette under the light of a gazebo. He points this out to Gabe who turns the camera to film it. As he starts zooming in they notice it quickly disappear into the shadows. Now, very creeped out, Gabe and Erick pick up the pace as they start to panic and wonder what that thing was. As they walk they start hearing  noises of something slowly approaching. Bracing himself Gabe quickly turns around to face whatever was behind them. To his surprise he is met with nothing but when he turns around he sees his friend is gone. Now terrified, Gabe quickly runs to take shelter in the bathroom. He locks himself in a stall where he gets out his phone to call for help. Before he can do that though, the lights in the bathroom get turned off. He hears footsteps approach his stall and then hears the voice of his friend Erick telling him that its safe to come out. However Gabe notices that something is off with the voice and stays inside. Finally a face emerges out of darkness at the top of the door. As it slowly fades in Gabe screams and the opening ends.